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DC:P - Give you up by Lorddragonmaster DC:P - Give you up by Lorddragonmaster
When I first started DCP the opening was rather quick. I wanted to get to Jonathan being a demon, and chapters were meant to be short.

All you guys got to see what a pushy girl try to get Jonathan to sign his soul away...when in fact there was a little more to it then that.

Just to clarify:

1. Teacher is throwing a book at Noelle as she tries to talk to him in class
2. She is waiting to pounce on him, but hiding in the wrong locker.
3. Sneaking into the boy's locker...in the wrong means of travel...
4. Waiting to give him her signature *KO*

The final panel is of course where he finally gives it all away...

:D

Also DCP is on break for a week! (meaning see you on the 28th) I am finally taking a vacation! Not from DCP, but after going to school and then work and then school and then work for 7 years I need a break! I am going to an all inclusive hotel for a week!

Dont worry I am taking my sketchbook! Hope you guys dont miss me too much!

~Lord Dragon Master
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nonesuch333 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Did she ever, per chance, consider just asking him out? I guess back then Jon was too boring to date for however long it would have taken to get him to sign something. Noelle was persistent, but she didn't have that kind of patience back then. Maybe he was deliberately shutting the world out, but if not, he seems like he would have welcomed a girlfriend. Or, for that matter, a drug addiction. In the end, I guess he ended up with both. 

I know you said it was the teacher throwing the book, but I still took some solace in the thought that it was a hobo/priest in disheveled robes and an unshaven beard who burst in yelling about smiting demons before throwing it, and who was then carried away by two cops as if nothing had happened. 
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Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
I think it is pretty clear she isnt very good at this. It was her first time, so obviously certain tactic wouldn't have crossed her mind,
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:iconnonesuch333:
nonesuch333 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Yeah, it's anyone's guess how she figured that hammer thing would translate to him writing his name on a piece of paper. 
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zangetsu172 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
i love your series, i have been watching for a while, cn't wait for the newest one
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Thanks! Hopefully this weekend!
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Lorneglomper Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Mean teacher. :XD: Hurtin' poor Noelle.
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FlameStreak3 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
one time when i was in kindergarted my teacher picked me up from my legs for simply playing blocks and then proceeded to slam my head onto a desk for not turning in my home work XD
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nonesuch333 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
So, how long was the prison sentence? 
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:iconlorneglomper:
Lorneglomper Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
:XD: Seriously? Geez.
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:iconflamestreak3:
FlameStreak3 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yup, i am not exagertating XD
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Lorneglomper Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
DX Holy crud! X3 Man all my teachers did was tell me to do it. The only teacher who hurt me was this sub who called me slow for not putting on my snow gear fast enough.
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Yoshiegg603 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
LOL at the fail noelle moments
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hellraisedkid Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
man john really likes the game lol^^
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
On the subject, didn't Noelle trick John into losing his soul at his house? *ponders*
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Nope, if you look back he signed the paper after he went through his locker. She collected it at his house.
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
*shrugs*
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Matthew001 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
You know, I thought that too, but looking back at the first page it really was outside the lockers. Though she does visit his house later on.
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:iconryu890:
Ryu890 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Hmm.... *shrugs*
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Saborlas Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Ya knoe, if you'd drawn his hair in the original style here, you could've set the stage for a few "use conditioner or I break out the bullwhip" gags later. Just sayin'.

/tell the story however you damn well please
//not every opportunity needs to be exploited
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Zogeno Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
; w ; human jon is cuuuute~
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Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
aw
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GayStudent Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Love the locker attempt. XD
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Hachiubi Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HF! nwn
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Elven-Dreamer Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you have a good trip! Sometimes we all need to get away.
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sorrowsdream Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I went away from dA for a while and finally caught up on this story. How is it, you capture, so perfectly the scene, everything about it. Everything that pulls me to it?
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Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Aw thank! You are too kind.
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battlecruiser006 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Uh isn't there supposed to be more by now?
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Uh. according to whom? Last I checked I do this for free.
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spleen2 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
National Lampoon's Leather Vacation.
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outlawwolfie Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
^^ enjoy your break can't wait to see the next comic :D
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sesshomaruxxx Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
nice
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Mr-Cryuga Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Couple thoughts come to mind, how did he not notice the girl stalking him around- oh wait it's Jonathan >.> not the most observant of people as records show

Second; have fun on vacation :la:
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
He only saw her once. They also are in the same class.
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:iconmr-cryuga:
Mr-Cryuga Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
and here I thought it was Jon being Jon XD
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LuciHadesManor Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
WIN. I love how we're starting to find out more about john before he went to hell too x3
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jolan5 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
so it was pretty easy after all?
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99a88 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.O the 28th!?!?!...oh well i guess i am noy the aster of this amazing story line. also <3<3<3 i loved her attemps,
but question for you...
if jons house blew up on the "surface" at night when he would undoubtable have been in it would he owe noelle his life???
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Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Well I actually leave saturday morning and dont get back for a week!

I guess if Jonathan's house did blow up he would be grateful.
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AnuOjat Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Talk about desperate crush :P
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jessica2kiv Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Yay, vacation time is awesome. Have a good time, school and work I understand. You deserve the rest!
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yournamehere8888 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011   Writer
You've really put a lot of thought and effort in this.
Go and have some fun, you deserve it. But we expect you to be greatly renewed after it.
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Lack-Rat Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
I reiterate, lurklurklurk etc. etc. lol
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Hunter2045 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Wow. Noelle was really after Jon. I wonder how he's going to react to her conffesion.
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TheYorkshireOtaku Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
XD So Jon has never noticed a creepy girl following him around all this time? Lol awesome :)
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Well technically she was just a student in his class. That and she is a ninja.
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TheYorkshireOtaku Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Hmm a stalking Ninja... Sounds fun :)
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Crimson-horse Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
jon's thinking in the last panel," jeez this girl is REALLY happy i signed her petition or survey or whatever, almost creepily happy."
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:iconlorddragonmaster:
Lorddragonmaster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
That poor poor fool....
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leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Heh, a master of entrapment she ain't. :XD:
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Matthew001 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Haha, wacky hijinks. :D

Have a nice holiday LDM, you deserve it after all your hard work.
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